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Glimpse Of Reality
Contributed by
moonlight
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:37:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Razor blade in hand,
Watching it slide across my skin...
Bite of unseen teeth,
Flash of pain...
Glimpse of reality,
Drop of blood falls to the floor...
I caress my arm,
Unconsciousness takes over..
Screams and sirens overtake my senses,
As I’m rushed to the emergency room...
Copyright ©
moonlight
... [
2005-02-24 23:37:52]
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Re: Glimpse Of Reality
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:43:53 PM AEST
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awesome write,but u shouldnt harm urself,it gets u no where,but hey we all make mistakes,great write,keep it up
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Re: Glimpse Of Reality
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:44:07 PM AEST
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Deep, personal and expressive. Very nicely done. Its short but to the point and written nicely. I hope that you are doing better now, If you need an ear, I have two so feel free to PM me.
Take Care
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Re: Glimpse Of Reality
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:25:50 PM AEST
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| do you go to fitz high |
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