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Ponderings of Her
Contributed by
Smooth
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Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once upon a daydream song, in time she'll surely see,
The beauty of her smile, and it's power over me.
Unending happiness and joy beyond belief,
A sharer of my spirit born, at a glance for us to meet.
How do I live my life complete without my valentine,
She is my very oxygen, her beauty so divine.
To the stars I stare all day and night, for a sign in them to read,
Comprehension of this turn of tricks, to finally believe.
Acceptance seems inevitable, to advance with all God's speed,
To relinquish all I've taken, to give her all she needs.
My debt to her a mountain, majestic, wild and free,
I owe her all the ocean, I owe her ALL of me.
In the end there will be beginning, a beginning so it seems,
A meeting of two spirits born, for eternity to dream.
To whisk away on stardust, to ride a heavens trail,
To boast a passion fire, Angelic voices to us hail.
Smooth
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Smooth
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2002-12-14 13:00:00]
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Re: Ponderings of Her
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by OreO on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:15:32 PM AEST
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Oh wow....im still trying to catch my breath on this one...whomever your heart beats for....whomever has captured your soul....i hope she's reading this coz it tis a masterpiece ...i dont even know where to begin to know what to say to this piece....it's captivated me....i have to read it again.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: Ponderings of Her
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 06:34:47 PM AEST
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| You have such a wonderful way with words .... I love reading your poetry and stories. This one just flows so beautifully. |
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Re: Ponderings of Her
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:47:03 PM AEST
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| This poems just jumped to the top of my favorite poems list. Wonderfully written, you are really good at expressing yourself! keep ths beautiful poetry comming, and never stop writing! =) |
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