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New Found High
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:53:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Rain drops,
Normally a little,
Sometimes alot.
Ink stains,
Staying in the spot,
Where it is droped.
Blood stays
In our veins,
As we slowly rot.
...
Rain evaporates,
From the ground
Back to the clouds.
Ink washes,
A little alcohol,
And a few wipes of a towel.
Blood drains,
Like the rain falls from the sky,
Opening where the ink staind.
Blade.
...
You vow,
New Found High.
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-24 22:53:38]
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Re: New Found High
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:20:26 PM AEST
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Expressive and creative. I like it, a bit different but thats okay :o) Very nicely done, it flows smoothly and is quite inspiring. I love the comparisons.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: New Found High
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 10:33:22 PM AEST
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| thank goodness youre poems are better than over half here...they can only hope to be this good. |
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Re: New Found High
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:22:05 AM AEST
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This is in the my top favorites for your poems. I thought this was an excellent write, I really enjoyed reading it. Awesome job Clark!
--amanda-- |
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