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Split
Contributed by
night_goddess666
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The music plays but I do not seem to hear it
My pen finishes my story but my fingers do not move
Creative thoughts run through my head but I am not thinking
The flame of the candle flickers but it is not lit
My eyes dart from left to right but my eyes are closed
A virus runs throughout me but I graciously welcome it
I’ve been chasing after something, when I realized that it was the path towards my grave
The world buzzes around me but for me it’s stopped in its tracks
The noises of the night have become my only symphony
The creatures of the shadows are my only companions
And that is where he came in…
He, the one that heard my cries for someone to understand me
To listen to me
To cherish me
To love me
He, the one that showed me the wonders of his world which is not my own
He….he is my watcher
He….he is my fallen angel
He….he is my god
He is here with me now
I see him in the shadows of my chamber
I can hear him breathe
I can hear him speak, but his lips do not move
His eyes burn into the dark realms of my soul
His icy touch is a warm beckon to my skin
He caresses my skin and the sensation is to die for
He gives me a dying rose, which in our eyes is full of life
And then I wake up
And I realize that he is not with me
I almost think that this creature is not real
Just a figure of my imagination
But as I walk towards the door I stepped upon something
I looked down at the floor to see the rose beneath my foot
I see a small droplet of blood on the rose
And I understand that there is so much beauty in the world that I always overlooked.
However, I promised him, my precious love, that I would join him in his world,
And now I realized what exactly I’m going to miss when I leave with him
I will miss my family
My friends
My home
But most importantly…I will miss the sunset.
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night_goddess666
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2005-02-24 22:26:20]
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Re: Split
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:55:59 PM AEST
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| woah, this is very touching and i really loved reading it.....i can relate very much |
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Re: Split
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by crazygirl on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:51:21 PM AEST
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| wow, thats deep. Its really good and just to say i really like all your poems, but this one just really moves me. Its amazingly real, and i can tottaly relate.Its awesome |
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Re: Split
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by the_oats on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:37:54 PM AEST
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I love the poem, it's beautiful, emotional and sweet
And also written beautifully, the style is great. A great writer must have written it :) |
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