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Anguish
Contributed by
poky1502
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Beauty burns with the anguish of jealousy.
So high above me i see only ashes.
Dead memories of what was
Serve to bury what will never be.
The hope is gone and you still smile.
With tears falling down i doubt your innocence.
What you had was true,
but pride is hard to swallow.
Hot blue flames took it all away.
The ash is running with the tears you cry.
The black river has come to drown you in sorrow.
Ill set you free only say the words.
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poky1502
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2005-02-24 22:15:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Anguish
(User Rating: 1 ) by quill_and_ink on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST (User
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I really love the language and imagery you have used here. It really gives the poem depth. Good write:) |
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Re: Anguish
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:29:44 AM AEST (User
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The words have deep intensity and meaning.
Beautifully worded.
I think it's a great write. |
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