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Tomorrow Is Promised
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:08:08 PM in AEST
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oops
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Tomorrow Is Promised
Reasons wither flowers
And the sun evaporates sorrow
Pigmentation reflects black on the doubters
That don't believe in a better tomorrow
The sun's eclipsed by clouds of despair
And now the stars start to tear
Black holes in the atmosphere
Nothing no longer reflects
And light cannot refract
The beginnings are the endings
Of all reasons and meanings
But they never existed to begin with
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2005-02-24 22:08:08]
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:29:31 PM AEST
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A little short for your norm Jennifer....But still another really thought out poem...as normal...=]
Clark |
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST
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I loved this. The imagery that you used was just perfection.
"The beginnings are the endings
Of all reasons and meanings"
Wow! |
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:40:21 PM AEST
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Very good writing as always.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:04:14 PM AEST
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Wow, what a deep thoughtful poem!! Amazing I love this one! Definitely five stars!
Anne :D |
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:02:13 PM AEST
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philsophy 101, huh? kind of existential at the end.
really nice.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Tomorrow Is Promised
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:43:16 AM AEST
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| Conclusion is fantastic..as there is no beginning there is no ending..:-)venkat |
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