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Close Your Eyes
Contributed by
cocacola1331
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Close your eyes and say goodbye
I'm not coming back
Not to this place
Not to this Hell
You of all people should know why
I'm broken now
Just a ragged wooden doll
I can't keep on living my life
Like this
So I'm going to end this awful
Cycle of nightmares
It's bringing me down
I'm not who I once used to be
Understand that
And one day you'll see
That this was the right choice for me
I have to take this into
My own hands
Since you refuse to help me
Close your eyes and say goodbye
You of all people should know why
Copyright ©
cocacola1331
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2005-02-24 20:21:23]
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Re: Close Your Eyes
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by Moonglow on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 08:39:12 PM AEST
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| this really moved me, people can go through so much pain and the person that caused that pain might not even know it. Very good write. |
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Re: Close Your Eyes
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:15:41 PM AEST
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| Please don't let him let you do that to yourself. Your a lovely poet and we the other poets need you, we want to keep reading your writes. We the other poets love you should that be enough for you to hold onto this to short a life anyway?....Wes... |
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Re: Close Your Eyes
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:21:06 PM AEST
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| this is very sad and the way i feel like now..just closing my eyes and saying goodbye. good write |
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Re: Close Your Eyes
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:07:31 PM AEST
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This really touched me. your poem reminded me of myself so much it almost scared me. great write keep it up.
-jen |
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