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My Life
Contributed by
stew
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:36:50 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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All my dreams are shattered
All my love is dead
My friends say I will get better
But that’s just what they said.
My trust for others is broken
This makes them very sad
But it’s their lies that fooled me
That makes me very mad.
I’ve made many mistakes
That I cannot take away
This is not very reassuring
But somehow I’ll find my way.
I hope my life will get better
And I can fix all my dreams
I am now making progress
At least, that’s the way it seems!
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stew
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2005-02-24 19:36:50]
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Re: My Life
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:41:41 PM AEST
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life will get better,it only seems like it wont bc ur not looking at the whole intire picture,doesnt it just suck that u cant trust no one bc a few ppl screwed with ya.anyways awesome write,i loved it,keep up the great job!!!
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Re: My Life
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by Gunda on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:45:18 PM AEST
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A really good write!! I know how it feels when you don`t belive that life never will smile at you. But just hang in there and tings will get better...
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Re: My Life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:50:51 PM AEST
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I hear ya. I knopw these feelings-n-thoughts very well.
hang tuff friend Cause u will make it.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Life
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:29:17 PM AEST
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| yup we all feel like our life is crap sometimes but i like the positive way you ended it~ |
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