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Just One Person
Contributed by
stew
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:34:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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People think I’m an idiot
I’m beginning to think they’re right
They’re making me weaker
And I’m losing all my might.
The Lord is doing nothing
To put these people in line
He’s just there watching
These people take what is mine.
I’m wanting them to stop
But I have no idea what to do
My heart is screaming and my mind is about to blow
Everything I’m telling you is true.
I hope there’s just one person
Who thinks different of me
Because I’m wonderful like you
Just wait and you’ll see
Copyright ©
stew
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2005-02-24 19:34:39]
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Re: Just One Person
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:38:41 PM AEST
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| greatly written poem! |
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Re: Just One Person
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:41:26 PM AEST
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Very good and i certainly can relate.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Just One Person
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by Gunda on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:46:39 PM AEST
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| Amazing |
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Re: Just One Person
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by Deathly_Rose on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST
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this was a great poem, it really capture dthe feelings of only wanting to be looked at as a human and not like an inanimate object... It was very well written and I hope that you feel better about yourself, you have a talent
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