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*A Rose In Full Bloom*
Contributed by
Sarah22
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Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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the break of dawn i go to my garden before
my very eyes, i see a red rose in full
bloom, aint that so beautiful and breath taking.
Copyright ©
Sarah22
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2002-12-14 12:00:00]
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Re: *A Rose In Full Bloom*
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:34:43 PM AEST
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aren't sure of urself more than u should girl to judge that this is so beautiful poem , wait till u see what other pple have to say about it !
i wont tell u what i think of it coz i dont wanna hurt u and becoz u'll get more comments because of me just like ur previous poems i commented
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Re: *A Rose In Full Bloom*
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:37:39 PM AEST
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| This isn't a haiku. A haiku is 5-7-5.... but still anyone with a reason to criticize should put their NAME to it, at least I am... keep writing Sarah... don't listen to anonymous, he/she's a coward. |
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