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Mornings
Contributed by
chelsmarie
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:00:27 PM in AEST
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oops
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A morning in November you expect to hear
"It's fruitcake weather!" from my friend
But i could tell something was wrong
that one November morning
when my friend could not even sit up to exclaim
that it was fruitcake weather
December came soon
and i could tell that things weren't looking good
my friend got worse
and finally drifted away
I still keep searching the sky
as if i expected to see, rather than hearts, a lost pair of kites toward heaven
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chelsmarie
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2005-02-24 18:00:27]
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Re: Mornings
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:21:55 PM AEST
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| A very touching poem and a good one. Keep writing. |
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Re: Mornings
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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| This is such a heartfelt write. Excellent work! I hope you continue to post, because I look forward to reading more of your poetry. :-) |
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