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*Popciles *
Contributed by
Sarah22
on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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on a hot summer day
me and my cool freinds
chill at the city park we
hang out by a cherry tree
and we eat popciles until
we all get sick .
Copyright ©
Sarah22
... [
2002-12-14 11:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: *Popciles *
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 01:38:00 PM AEST (User
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no wonder you don't get much comments ! improve ur style, its an advice and not a critic |
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