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Hope's Wish
Contributed by
beniam
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:43:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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What have we done to Hope?
Did we somehow cause his wish not to come true?
In turn, he taunts us with dreams.
He plays with our feelings at his whim.
What have we done? That he wounds our hearts so?
Is he in Misery's company that in turn he deems the same for us?
What have we done to Hope?
Finally, I felt I could not bear this anymore from Hope and asked this same question.
Low and behold, he was bitter and in pains himself.
Because the hand of Love he had asked, but Love herself had turned him down.
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beniam
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2005-02-24 17:43:44]
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Re: Hope's Wish
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:06:10 PM AEST
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Ilove the topic of hope and this was a new perspective.
Thanks for writing |
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Re: Hope's Wish
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by Rhymingron on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:24:54 PM AEST
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| A nice write. |
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Re: Hope's Wish
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:52:01 AM AEST
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Very intriguing take on the topic of hope.
I liked it...the personification of feelings.
Well-written. |
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Re: Hope's Wish
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by jace on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:16:48 PM AEST
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Wow that's a mouth full
great write benni
little sad but true |
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