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Love Is Life's Biggest Mystery
Contributed by
high_on_duct_tape
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:25:23 PM in AEST
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Love is life's biggest mystery
That no one can explain
No way of knowing what to do
Or what to say
I like to live life in control
Which might be why I can't stand love
In love there is no control
And the odds are against me
Do you love me?
Or, is that even the right question?
Will I ever know?
Must I risk what little I have for such a small piece of knowledge?
A small piece of knowledge
And yet, more important than anything else
To me, anyway
Which is why I hate love
I almost would
Would give up everything I have
Just for a chance
A chance to be with you
Almost, but not quite
Not yet anyway
But I get closer and closer every time I see you
To surrendering my life
Love is life's biggest mystery
And, Oh! what a mystery
Love is a treasure locked away in a chest
But I can never find the key
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Re: Love Is Life's Biggest Mystery
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM AEST
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| no one can ever find the key, but like you have to be with most people, understanding, you have to understand, that there are downs and ups in love, and it is all confusing, because your heart (feelings, emotions, & soul) is on the line.. which is why we are always willing to risk our lives for that piece of knowledge, and why we are so scared to as well. no one wins in the game of love, but we all win if we just love, and not think it is a game.... except no one out there will, they love to play too many games... which is again the reason why we fear it, and get confused....but Great write. |
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Re: Love Is Life's Biggest Mystery
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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| No one will ever be able to find that key to unlock ur heart except for that one guy....i have a guy thats just like that for me i kow how you feel..love is truly a mystery theres no time spent not thinking bout them or trying to dial their number...their the one person you know you can rely on for everything , without them life wouldnt be complete....your poem is totally true...keep writing this poem is a masterpiece just waiting to win a prize, so true and i love having the ability to relate to it. ~~chrissy |
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Re: Love Is Life's Biggest Mystery
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:10:08 PM AEST
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love is a mystery - but it makes sense to follow your heart - at least to this messed up poet...
nice job. |
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Re: Love Is Life's Biggest Mystery
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:38:39 PM AEST
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| Love is just a thing whos key has been lost to most of the world. Just hang in there, things'll clear up. |
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