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At Least I Try
Contributed by
high_on_duct_tape
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:10:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I sleep
Or at least I try
If I do, I dream
I dream of you
Then I wake up
I think about life
About love
About you
And again I sleep
Or at least I try
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Re: At Least I Try
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:22:21 PM AEST
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| short and to the point, good write! |
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Re: At Least I Try
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:23:25 PM AEST
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yes short and to the point but alittle sad too.
well done. |
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Re: At Least I Try
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by Dusty on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:36:41 AM AEST
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Very Simple, but got the point across. I like.
Dusty~ |
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Re: At Least I Try
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:55:31 AM AEST
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Sweet-sounding and somehow quite complete.
The flow is good, the simplicity is charming.
Keep writing... |
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