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Why
Contributed by
BrownHon3yXXX
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:07:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why do you make me angry
Why do you get in my business
I wish you would leave me alone
I wish I could just dismiss this
Dismiss the anger you cause inside
Dismiss the feelings that make me cry
A lot of times I wish you were dead
So that I can get you out of my head
You and me weren't meant to be
As one in perfect harmony
I try to work all our problems out
Because they're all I can think about
Maybe one day i'll truly see
That you do what you do because you love me
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2005-02-24 14:07:50]
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Re: Why
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:29:31 PM AEST
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im not exactly sure who this could be about.. maybe a parent or simply a loved one.. and im sure that is the reason.. because you are truly loved.. this person actually cares..
wonderful write
luck to you
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Re: Why
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by freckle on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:38:45 PM AEST
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| A good write. The flow seemed just a little off in some spots. Good though for a beginner! Keep posting! |
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