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You Are a Fool
Contributed by
LadyWynter
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:00:28 PM in AEST
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You go to her, seeking out the hollow promise of love she offers
Letting your desperate desire to be wanted blind you to the truth
You think one day she'll love you, but you are a fool
Submitting yourself time and again to her wicked, twisted whims
You sacrifice every shred of dignity you have, your very soul
Never realising she only craves your degradation
You have ached for her, cried for her, even bled for her
Telling yourself if only you give a little more you'll be worthy
If only you could see how you disgust her
You are naught to her but a toy, to abuse as she so desires
It's the shame she sees in your eyes that gets her off, nothing more
But you are a fool, and you don't see
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Arsenic on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:04:15 PM AEST
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Flee the Evil Woman eh? Ironic that just today I was thinking the same thing. :-) Good thoughts and well stated.
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:18:18 PM AEST
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another brilliant write :) keep up the good work
pix xx |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:00:35 PM AEST
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Wow .... uh, I did not expect that.
Sometimes words make me pause and just leave me stunned by their weight. Usually when I can relate to them. ... this floored me on a very personal level.
Nazzy ~
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by my-angel-has-black-wings on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:47:11 PM AEST
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yes,i am a fool
good poem
steal my thoughts |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:28:11 PM AEST
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very powerful write.
I like it alot.keep them coming. |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:21:31 AM AEST
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that was excellent, thought provoking and raw.
i loved it. |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Stitch on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:40:18 AM AEST
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Well said. Very well said.
Stitch |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:57:45 PM AEST
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| Deep, powerful, and a rude awakening for some. |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:20:44 PM AEST
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You write like I wish I could. Seriously.
This is great, I can't even pick a favourite line, and once again you have conquered the flow.
A great write, you are slowly becoming one of my favourite poets.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: You Are a Fool
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 06:12:19 PM AEST
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the wise man does at once what the fool does
finally, a beautiful exquisite write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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