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Stuck in This Spot
Contributed by
my-angel-has-black-wings
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i cant move and i cant breathe
you were here and now youre gone
you were so hard to believe
and you were all i wished upon
i cant think and i cant leave
this piece of heart inside my soul
i tried to break myself away
tried to pretend i could be whole
but there is nothing without you
and i know you will depart
its just another love that died
im just another broken heart
and when i wish that i was dead
i really wish i felt alive
the only way out is through you
i used my heart and not my mind
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2005-02-24 12:42:06]
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Re: Stuck in This Spot
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by movax on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:53:53 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Really lets one feel the emotion |
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Re: Stuck in This Spot
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:35:55 PM AEST
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I like this. It's well written. You could use a few caps though.
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