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As They Fall
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:26:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As they fall, my teardrops,
All my smiling & happiness stops,
In comes the flooding pain,
It is here to hurt me once again.
There is nobody there to catch my tears,
My cries fall on so many deaf ears,
I may as well be the only person left,
On earth I feel alone & wind swept.
Can anyone hear my cry?
How do I go on when I wish to die?
Please someone tell me what I should do,
How would you handle it if it were you?
I’m sick & tired of feeling like *****,
I’m totally fed up of being down in this pit,
Why can’t I be happy like all the others?
Why don’t I feel secure away from my lover?
I doubt every word he utters,
Up goes my wall & down come the shutters,
Lover & friend seems to turn to foe,
This pain is hurting, hurting nice & slow.
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Re: As They Fall
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 12:49:15 PM AEST
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that was good, and hit right at home....
How would you handle it if it were you?
i know exactly what your talking about, but i cannot persuade you to think everything is exactly on the dot the same, but i'd still live for you, i'd still live for the people who do love you, and i'd still live for the times that you did have a smile on your face, i'd live to see another on your face, and most of all good or bad memories are to be treasured, you remember the good for encouragement, and the bad for understanding, and to not do again. every experience is what will make you who u are... and no matter what anyone says you are yourself, not pathetic, not amazing, compliments good and bad, should be taken but never misunderstood, compliments are to make you feel either better than yourself or lesser than yourself. the higher you feel the harder you fall, and the worse you feel the harder it is to feel better, so listen to me when i say, trust me someone out there does want you around. and as for relationships, they are all good, even when they are bad, you will be able to look at it in the future and say that is what happened in that relationship, and now i know what to do to make it better.... if you doubt anoyone, there is no trust, and i'm sure you would have a reason for the distrust, security from a man, given to a woman is the best feeling ever, maybe you love him more than yourself, that is why you do not feel secure without him, and sweetie trust me i am not talking bull*****, i was in a relationship, where i loved him more than myself, and did not feel secure without him, and it ended i feel secure without him, and we still talk, as friends though. i am still fearful of entering a relatioship now because of it, and i want to love myself more, (the hard thing is that i care about everyone else more than myself) so when i love myself more, a new relationship will be better and more loving on two ends instead of one. ___ try a little space and trust, try to think i am okay, and so is he, try to think, the more you two are away from eachother the better you will feel once the connection is made... most of all just relax, Everything will be okay... oh ***** i wrote wayyyy too much,, |
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Re: As They Fall
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by bethie on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:26:15 PM AEST
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| This is heart wrenching . The last stanza is so familiar. Thanks. |
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Re: As They Fall
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:13:29 PM AEST
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aww hugs pixie girl.
I am here if you ever needed to talk.
great emotional piece.. |
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Re: As They Fall
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:38:15 PM AEST
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It isn't easy bein away from someone ... but trust deffinately helps to ease the pain ... I hope you are able to get there Pixie. Trust is important ...
Nazzy ~
( you wrote of your doubts very well ) |
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Re: As They Fall
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:22:08 AM AEST
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I feel the pain and sadness in ur heart, Pixie.
Trust does make it alot easier to handle when u r away from ur lover.
otherwise a great, deep emotional write |
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Re: As They Fall
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by Stellar on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:13:04 PM AEST
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Every bit of this is familiar to me. I've definitely been in that place. It's a time I in my life that I never want to relive. When I was stuck in my own "pit", no matter how many times I hard, there's a light at the end, I didn't believe it. But there honestly, truly is. The only condition is that you never, ever give up.
Take care ~Stellar |
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