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Psalm of truth
Contributed by
Kalyle
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I walk through the deadly thorns of these dangerous valleys
Because I carry the cross that my Brother once carried.
To die for ascension in a life beyond above
And dressed In robes as pure and white an a dove
To receive eternal life and live with god’s promised love
Till the then of my live I will imagine this holy dream
But life in not what it is cracked up to be at least that’s what it seems
Because demons roam the earth to implanting the devil’s seeds.
And trapped among them are us souls of peace awaiting to be set free
Finding our happiness because we chose find God and believe.
So in in heaven all high our crowns of stars we shall receive.
On earth what our eyes see is the definition of deceit
A world full of Fallen angels that we have to defeat
Struggling everyday as holy wars of history repeats
So we must brake the chains of illusions that our body conceals
Then truly will our hearts be revealed
And then shall we find what a true reward really means.
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Kalyle
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Re: Psalm of truth
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:42:59 AM AEST
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The real and ultimate struggle is for each human soul. You have said it well.
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Re: Psalm of truth
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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Well done but it needs to be polished up a bit. Check for little things like grammar and spelling (such as brake should be break). I found this verse encouraging:
Finding our happiness because we chose find God and believe.
So in in heaven all high our crowns of stars we shall receive.
I found this line to be particularly true:
So we must brake the chains of illusions that our body conceals
Then truly will our hearts be revealed
And then shall we find what a true reward really means.
God bless,
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