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Angel
Contributed by
Vigilante006
on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A beautiful angel, a perfect dove
A glimpse of heaven, sent from above
A marvelous being, so pure and clean
A more wondrous creature eyes have never seen
A soul unsullied by mere mortal’s hand
The very sight of her weakens the greatest man
With beauty eclipsing that of Aphrodite
Not even Venus is so lovely
Just a glimpse of her face and I was undone
Then she smiled and my breath was gone
At her touch I fell under her spell
When she looked in my eyes my heart swelled
From whence she came I do not know
But I pray to God she does not go
All I can speak of is the miracle I see
That a perfect angel has come to me
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Vigilante006
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2002-12-14 08:30:00]
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Re: Angel
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by gina on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:29:46 AM AEST
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| ewwwwwww how sweet ,very good for the first time in love poetry :) |
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Re: Angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 10:43:57 AM AEST
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| Beautiful just beautiful! I really liked this! Christina |
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Re: Angel
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:13:15 AM AEST
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Nice couplets about someone you love.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Angel
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by R.G.Love on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:25:23 PM AEST
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| Great work!!! and this is coming from an experienced love poet. A good job, indeed!!! |
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Re: Angel
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:13:00 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. Your a natural |
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