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A Secret Love
Contributed by
beniam
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:29:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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To be without you, is to be overtaken by water.
The current so overwhelming and strong,
But still, I wish, I hope, I fight to go on,
The breath I take is when I see you,
Even tho it doesn't last long.
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beniam
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2005-02-24 02:29:01]
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Re: A Secret Love
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:38:44 AM AEST
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Yes, that is EXACTLY what it feels like.
Good stuff. I love it when a poet says so much in so few words.
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Re: A Secret Love
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by jace on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:34:00 AM AEST
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Come on , cheesy,
this is true expresion, and beniam here was kind
enough to share it with us, how crude of you to say, that,
I shall be reviwing your wouk soon!!!
Great work Beniam, truly expresive, a little short,
I wanted more, |
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