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Too Late
Contributed by
Rumplestilskin
on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:39:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Closer and closer the pendulum swings
The executioner of broken dreams
The chiming of the clock
Marks my every breath
The sands of the hour
Are about to pass
So short and yet so long
Time claims another one
All that I should have said
And all that I should have done
The hurt of knowing
That words no longer can be undone
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Rumplestilskin
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2005-02-24 01:39:17]
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Re: Too Late
(User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:01:06 AM AEST
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| the first verse sounds like it would make a wicked song :D i like it, good work |
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Re: Too Late
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by Ninnyfarfar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:36:48 AM AEST
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| I really liked it , thought it was awesome, kepp it up! |
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