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Today's Tommorrow
Contributed by
shelliewilliams
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Well, well, what do I say-Looks like what comes around goes around.
And everyone will have their final say~Sometime, someday.
Looks like I only love God when the sunshines my way~Looks like I'm into
divinity only when I can see it's sweet, sweet days.
I say what I mean, but I don't mean what I say~Well, well, it's fine out today
I say what I mean, but I don't mean what I say~Well, well, it's fine out.
Well, well what do I say~I never seen a bad day look quite this way
And well, well, what do I do, when all my thoughts run right back to you?
Looks like I meant to speak to logic, but hon' the carnal always get's in the way.
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2005-02-24 01:33:27]
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Re: Today's Tommorrow
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by Rumplestilskin on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:48:06 AM AEST
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| I love ironic titles coupled with excellent work. Good job. |
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Re: Today's Tommorrow
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by Arsenic on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:40:57 PM AEST
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Here goes, in my softest manageable voice…I have no idea what I just read! It was very well written, and a pleasure to read, but I have to go back through it a couple of times to make sure I actually get it. Maybe it is just me, but I found this very captivating despite making my brain hurt. Thanks.
ARSENIC
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Re: Today's Tommorrow
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by Mangs on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:54:37 PM AEST
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| nice poem...uve managed to use irony in the same line...very hard to do..but uve carried it off well...looking forward to reading more of your stuff. |
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