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From Cirrus to Cirrus
Contributed by
smilychicaa
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:45:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Red wings---graze softly on my face, don't know why I'm here, when dying's not my fear,
No such thing--- as a sewn up broken heart, and you know I'm not the sort to shred your favorite part.
Don't be to honest I can't take it,
if I fall I know I'll break it, oh---If I fall I know I'll break it.
Now I'm so sorry, I'm not worth it,
I know that I did deserve it, I deserved to fall, deserved to fall.
Now I'm positive you're angry
and I'm sure you know I'm not,
and I'm positive you meant it when you told me I was shot,
and I know you wouldn't lie to me if all I do is fall,
I know you wouldn't lie to me,
don't lie to me at all.
Don't be to honest I can't take it, if I fall I know I'll break it, oh---If I fall I know I'll break it.
Now I'm so sorry, I'm not worth it, I know that I did deserve it, I deserved to fall, deserved to fall....deserved to fall.
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Re: From Cirrus to Cirrus
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:20:14 PM AEST
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I was once told two things by my writing teacher.. # 1.. no matter what the content.. no one can write it the same as you.. # 2.. once a reader reads the authors work, it no longer belongs to them.
your poem feels my heart with sadness.. I want to help the 'I'm" in the poem to escape the tragedy.. to get up and go forward... allowing the 'almighty' to care for.. |
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Re: From Cirrus to Cirrus
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by KayeRains on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:53:27 PM AEST
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| Hmm... Interesting. |
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Re: From Cirrus to Cirrus
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by crystalfire on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:55:23 PM AEST
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| I'm pretty sure I'm depressed now, thats so deep, very interesting indeed... |
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