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Enlightenment is Relative

Contributed by acid_lucidity on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:42:44 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Lethargic and alone
Living for the sake of existing
The great encompassing point
Written on stone
Worn away by the wind
Buried yet revealed by a storm

Cracked broken lost and stolen
Decipher the code and know me
Then life will be life again
Worthy of my attention
Promises promises
And never an answer

Expose and free my evil
Feed it my blood
The snake eats itself
Eternal moonlit lust
Mouth to tail
Forever in a frowning face

My thoughts implode
The latent unused pieces shatter
And liquify my life
Everything is darker now
All choices forgotten
Inbetween a hearbeat

Maybe when the walls bleed
And the sun turns black
When night is day with the light of deadly fire
And the people stop talking of peace
Not even realising reality is forever wrong
We will see the real world

Copyright © acid_lucidity ... [ 2005-02-23 21:42:44]
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Re: Enlightenment is Relative (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:32:35 AM AEST
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VERY NICE I LIKE YOUR POETRY ALL WROTE WELL

PS COMMENT ON SOME OF MY POEMS THANKS

BEE*

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