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The Death of the Sky
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:13:50 PM in AEST
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The Death of the Sky
Brought up to the sky
Only to die
You're only as good as the past
And you're still nothing
You bled my pains away
Only to make them flow another day
You dried my tears with your hand
Only to make them glitter in the sands
Of time that never forgets
With the past that always relives
The same misery
That the veins of glass bleed
That the veins of meaning
Distort at the seams
Completely shattered into pieces
Trustless with my conviction
Faith in you fell through
When I fell from the sky
And you left me to die
Shattered in the sands of time
Bleeding the meanings of life
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2005-02-23 21:13:50]
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Re: The Death of the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST
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Wow...This gave me goosebumps. Awesome piece!
"You bled my pains away
Only to make them flow another day
You dried my tears with your hand
Only to make them glitter in the sands"
Beautiful stanza. |
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Re: The Death of the Sky
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:25:01 PM AEST
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That final stanza is amazing Jennifer...But thats nothing new...for you at least...=]
Clark |
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Re: The Death of the Sky
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by confuzd_rainbow on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:50:48 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. great write. |
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Re: The Death of the Sky
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by Lessa on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:18:49 PM AEST
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| I LOVE THIS!! |
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Re: The Death of the Sky
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 03:29:21 PM AEST
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with the aroma of patchouli and cedar filling my nostrils and the strains of 'voodoo' echoing in my ears, i must commend you for the final touches...i just closed my eyes and felt the moment. nicely done
thanks for sharing
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