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a smile in a picture
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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before the sky there are no fences facing,
its just a shadow i see that im chasing,
no time for eracing...some things worth left changing,
finding nothing weak remaining.
let me forget about today untill tomorrow,
leave it allone,so i can borrow.
just a smile in a picture.
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Re: a smile in a picture
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:31:53 PM AEST
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good write, gives out alot of emotion to the reader, well done!
+ nail-to-the-head + |
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Re: a smile in a picture
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:47:01 PM AEST
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| I like how it all came together in the end. Great piece you have here. |
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Re: a smile in a picture
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST
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this peice was explosive with imagery. beautifully drawn.
~i'm bound to love someone, i wish i could slit your throat and kill the weakness that means loving you, you're killing me~weepingprophet |
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Re: a smile in a picture
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 05:50:07 PM AEST
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Flawless... This is all I can say for now.. More when more words come. All my love. Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy. *Fleur* |
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