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Inner Sanctum
Contributed by
maylaur
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:01:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Paradise lost
Living in a dream
Darkness immense
Suffering scream
Powerful voice
So loud so loud
Down from above
Beat down the proud
Hearing the force
Waiting below
Hold on tighter
Cannot let go
Pulling so hard
Struggling within
Biting the ropes
Cutting of skin
Follow me up
Braving the cold
Trial of life
Join with the bold
Copyright ©
maylaur
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2005-02-23 20:01:39]
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Re: Inner Sanctum
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:12:14 PM AEST
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| This is a really good write. The flow was just great. Nice work. Keep it up. |
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Re: Inner Sanctum
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:41:34 PM AEST
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great write! really liked this! as already sed, love the flow and structure of it! well done!
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Re: Inner Sanctum
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:55:38 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Awesomely powerfull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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