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Walking To My Death
Contributed by
cocacola1331
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm gonna take a walk
A walk that lasts forever
And goes onto where the earth ends
Where there's a cliff that seperates
The Known from the Unknown
Don't expect me to come home
Because I'm leaving for real this time
Don't search for me, please,
Because that'll just make things harder
I'm gonna take a walk
A walk that lasts forever
This will be the last time you see me
So take a good long look
And remember every last detail
I'm gonna take a walk
And jump off that cliff
Into the Unknown
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cocacola1331
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2005-02-23 19:25:58]
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Re: Walking To My Death
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:24:41 PM AEST
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The Known from the Unknown
not bad...not much form...okay use of words..over all okay
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Re: Walking To My Death
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:48:33 PM AEST
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Very strong masterpeice as we all feel this way at times, some more than others.
hang tuff as it's a great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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