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Revenge Turns To Death
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 06:25:19 PM in AEST
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I sit alone with my thoughts of you
Tearing at my skin
I seek revenge for the pain youve caused
The harrowing ache within
And as I watch the drip drop of red
Slowly descending down
I wish it was your blood, not mine
You should wear this frown
But I swear on my grave
That I will find a way
To show you how you ruined my life
Up until this day
You'll feel your heart slowly stop beating
Each minute hurting worse
I'll laugh like a maniac
As I impose this curse
I'll bite at your flesh
Releasing every demon within
Feel the pain Ive dealth with
You back-stabbing friend..
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Daniels_Princess
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2005-02-23 18:25:19]
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Re: Revenge Turns To Death
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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good write, interesting structure.one thing you can always trust a friend with, is not to be trusted.
+ nail-to-the-head + |
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Re: Revenge Turns To Death
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:15:36 AM AEST
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Very powerful here. I am sorry this happened to you. I can relate to a friend who backstabs. It sucks. Stay strong.
Scott |
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Re: Revenge Turns To Death
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:03:44 PM AEST
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| Nail-to-the-head and Scott--thank you both for your replies, their much appreciated! |
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