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always one guy
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:59:12 PM in AEST
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Theres always that one guy that seems to make u change ur feelings for him.
Makes u believe he luvs u,
leads u on like a song,
then crushes your heart, and tells u he'd never feel the same way for you!
Those guys are all over the world, playin gurls 1 by 1!
If only they'd realize how much it hurts when people do that to others.
There's always that one guy who seems mysterious and shy then u get to know him and learn to love him, then he manages to slowly move away, or his plans with u always manage to get canceled.
Then theres those people who pass, and u really wanna tell them how much they mean to u , but once they pass, u know ull never have the chance, u'd wish u already gotten your feelings out of the way!
Then theres those people that surround u and talk and talk bout why he dumped u, or why u dumped him...i mean all they do is gossip and eventually rumors are spread.
I believe theres one guy for every gurl in this world...just wish i didnt have to wait so long for mine!
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Re: always one guy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:18:01 PM AEST
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awwwwww I hope you find him soon.
This is a lovely piece, my only critique as a guy is that there are plenty of women that do the same thing, people are people regardless of gender some are good some are bad.
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Re: always one guy
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by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:31:32 PM AEST
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| hey...i know how you feel.ive been through A rough relationship latley.i guess its best to learn from the bad guys...lol i know it seems like they all suck after a while.im still waiting for my true love too,i know its not the one im with.arg life getts confusing.i really did like and understand your poem i just hope you dont give up on waiting and take the next thing that struts along>peace be with you sister. |
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Re: always one guy
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:46:08 PM AEST
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so... true. This is really good. It made me feel better about corey, and no he hasn't even tried to contact me or see me at all. You know I thought that me and him were friends before this whole thing happened. I guess not. May be I'll write a poem about that. I'm not sure. But I do know this Chris will regret his actions Just like corey will.
Shannon
"We are young, heartache to heartache we stand
No promises, no demands
Love is a battlefield
We are strong, no one can tell us we’re wrong
Searchin’ our hearts for so long, both of us knowing
Love is a battlefield" - Pat Benatar-
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Re: always one guy
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:53:42 AM AEST
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great write! i think every girl knows what you're talking about in this poem. those guys that don't seem to understand how much they can hurt with just one word or just one look.
great poem again!
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