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Letting You Breathe
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 02:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am still feeling very frightened,
My sense of insecurity has been heightened,
When you aren’t standing right by my side,
I feel like I just want to hide.
But I have to be strong for us to last,
That’s the only thing of me you’ve asked,
I love you & I hold you so dear,
So I will now deal once & for all with my fear.
It’ll be hard as we both know,
But for us to breathe I have to let go,
It has damaged too much of us already,
Knocked us around, knocked us unsteady.
I was suffocating you but I didn’t realise,
I could not hear your muffled cries,
As my needs were blocking those of yours,
I was trying to trap you behind closed doors.
Keep you in my sight not let you leave,
I was killing you not letting you breathe,
I failed to see all this because I was too scared,
To open my eyes & be selfless I wasn’t prepared.
But now I am as I nearly lost you,
Although I still want to stick just like glue,
I will back off & give you your space,
As from your heart I know our love you won’t erase.
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pixie
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2005-02-23 14:34:19]
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:47:39 PM AEST
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tHIS iS wEll wRitTeN i gIvE iT a 10 iF i CAn pixie yOu arE aN aMaZiNg wrItTer i REalLy eNjOy rEaDiNg you're poEmS vEry MuCh... kEeP uP tHe gREaT wOrK
P.s i loVE Although I still want to stick just like glue, I will back off a give you your space, As for your heart i know our love you won't erase. I LoVe ThaT PaRt
I HOpE wiT WaTeVer YoU aRe GOiNG ThRo One DaY it wILL aLL BE a MeMOrY ThaT You wiLL baCk To AnD laUgH BeCauSe In ThE lOnG RuN YoU wiLL oNe Day Be HaPPy..
UnKnOwN BUTTerFLy |
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:05:47 PM AEST
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38 Special said it best ...
" Hold on loosely, but don't let go
If you cling too tightly you're gonna loose control "
Here for ya Pixie, anytime ... drop a note anytime ... I'll leave the light on ...
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:37:04 PM AEST
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| i really liked the sense of unaware physical power that was in this poem, whether you ment it to be that way or not it was really great seeing it, i liked the whole sense of doing something that you weren't aware of doing i saw in the poem.... good job |
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by givingin on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:02:03 AM AEST
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I'm glad you had these people to help you through your difficult time.
I'm sorry that you almost lost your love pixie.
I'm sorry that I wasn't there for you though.
Anywho, great write.
MUAH!
*~givingin~*
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by Dawny on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:25:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Pixie, and I will always be here...thats what friends are for xxx
Really happy you are feeling better
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: Letting You Breathe
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:59:17 AM AEST
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Oh hunni...
I will always always be here for you...
I glad that things between you and Mark have worked out. I know you could get through this, you don't know how strong you really are...
Great write sweeties,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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