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A HUSBAND WITH NO LOVING TOUCH
Contributed by
dancingcatz
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:46:19 AM in AEST
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A knife to the wrist, a punch with a fist
It all means the same to me
They hurt and cause pain, and drive me insane
But none of them break me free
A slap to the face, the purest disgrace
Beatings day in and day out
A bruise from the floor, black eye from the door
So this is what my life’s about
Dragged from the hall, and pushed to the wall
And told if I move I'm dead
Physically abused, to keep him amused
Death would be better instead
30 long years and rivers of tears
A husband with no loving touch
Day after day, he treats me this way
But I still love him very much
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dancingcatz
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Re: A HUSBAND WITH NO LOVING TOUCH
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:01:28 AM AEST
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such a powerful poem, many women suffer from abuse day after day its very sad, you put this together well
pix xx |
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Re: A HUSBAND WITH NO LOVING TOUCH
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:49:58 PM AEST
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dAnCInGcAt i ReALLy DO ApOLOgiZe If THIs Is ReAlLy HaPPEnInG TO You.. No OnE DeSErVeS To Be In THis SItUaTioN No OnE NoT You nOt ANYoNe.. YoU ProbaBLy LoVe Him BeCauSe You ARE ThiNkIn FrOM youR HeArT anD nOt yOuR miNd a loT oF US wOmEn sEeM tO tHiNk fRoM oUr heArts AnD nOt oUr mInD.. dAncInGcAt i Know yOu LovE hIm AnD All bUt wHy put yOur lIfE iN tHAt KiNda SiTuAtIOn THeiR ArE MaNy MaNy MeN OuT tHere tHAt cAn tReAt yOu wIth So MuCh lovE anD neVeR pUt A hAND oN yOu... you DeSeRvE betTer THen a mAN pUtTinG hiS BAre hANdS oN yOu..
unkNOwN bUtTerFly |
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Re: A HUSBAND WITH NO LOVING TOUCH
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:36:12 PM AEST
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| Whoever this poem is about you or someone else, don't you think there is something wrong with not only the guy but with a woman who can love someone who constantly abuses them. Both need some counseling. I was in an abusive relationship myself many moons ago. It didn't take long to realize, being beat and being belittled IS NOT LOVE. Thank goodness I did not stay because now I am with a wonderful man who actually loves me and doesn't treat me like his possession. Much peace to you. |
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Re: A HUSBAND WITH NO LOVING TOUCH
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by hopefulheavyheart on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:15:33 AM AEST
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| You have a great way of writing. You are able to rhyme without compromising the content. Wow, I hope you are not allowing someone to hurt you like that. I also hope you do not have children that have seen it. |
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