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Lost Love
Contributed by
p0rnstar
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart is sad,
it's crying,
bloody tears of heart.
My heart misses you,
it needs you to care of,
it needs you to love to,
without you it dies,
without you it has no reason.
Like I was part of your soul,
you were lost piece of my soul,
you were lost half of my heart,
you are my lost love.
Without you what hope do I have?
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p0rnstar
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2005-02-23 08:24:06]
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Re: Lost Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:38:29 AM AEST
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Beautiful yet sad at the same time, i can relate to your fine words only so well.
Great write, and i hope to see more of it soon.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Lost Love
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:10:46 AM AEST
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very sad and emotional write, this poem spoke to my heart, keep up the good writes
pix xx |
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Re: Lost Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:28:57 AM AEST
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Awesome writing!
hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
keep writing.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Lost Love
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 07:35:37 AM AEST
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Well said. I've become a fan. You do control your words very well. From reading your poems, it seems as if you are able to write down exactly what you want to. I wish so much for that ability. I never find the words. While your words are sad in this one, they convey much truth.
Take care.
David |
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