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The Curse Of Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:11:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel as if I have been cursed,
As evils lips lay eagerly pursed,
Ready to whisper vulgarity into my ear,
Taking my heart & filling it with fear.
Midas touched things, they turned to gold,
I do the same & things die & turn cold,
I feel like my insides have all rotted,
That in my blood badness has clotted,
Even the devil won’t be my friend,
To my loneliness there is no end,
I am destined to be left all alone,
Into my life a deadly silence has been blown.
Friends never stay around for too long,
It seems by myself is where I belong,
The only thing I ever seem to inflict,
Is pain, upset & emotional conflict.
All I want to do is show affection,
But my hurt is flung in every direction,
I try to love others & hold them close,
But I seem to turn them into a dead & hollow ghost.
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pixie
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2005-02-23 08:11:09]
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Re: The Curse Of Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:46:39 AM AEST
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Oh this was so good, brilliant write Krissie.
Great ryming and the stanza all fit perfectly.
Even the devil won’t be my friend,
To my loneliness there is no end,
I am destined to be left all alone,
Into my life a deadly silence has been blown.
Ditto, i so know what you mean...
Jane ;-) |
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Re: The Curse Of Me
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:12:27 AM AEST
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A well done exploration of what's frustrating you.
Stitch |
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Re: The Curse Of Me
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 10:24:25 AM AEST
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| Pixie I could have written this poem when I was a very young man. I thought the world was against me then I found that it was me against the world. Geat poem hugs from bernard. |
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Re: The Curse Of Me
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:54:37 AM AEST
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GReat write
GOD BLESS.
*BEBE |
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Re: The Curse Of Me
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 06:15:30 PM AEST
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Hey Pixie ... you'll always have a friend in me ...
I agree that this is a great job exploring your frustrations. I can feel it, so can many others ...
Nazzy ~ |
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