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Her
Contributed by
Neil
on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 06:54:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The fire’s embers softly burned
While for sleep, my body yearned
But to nap, I do disdain
For I will dream of her again
Her, with eyes that sparkle brightly
Cut you down to size, politely
Cheeks of rose and flaxen hair
Give men cause to stop and stare
Her, with all her pleasant charms
That beguiles and then disarms
Brings the strongest man to knees
The beauty of her is all he sees
Her, who captured my heart and soul
Emotions that I can’t control
Have left me bound and weak of thought
Useless to the life I sought
So, I dare not sleep, for in my dreams
I will hear my own heart’s screams
Screams that take away my breath
And, I fear, will be my death.
Copyright ©
Neil
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2005-02-23 06:54:39]
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Re: Her
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:07:21 AM AEST
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| You poem and my Haiku go hand in hand. Good write keep it up. |
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Re: Her
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 08:01:06 AM AEST
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Beautiful just beautiful.
It's simple and yet theres so much love to it.
Great write Neil
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Her
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:36:23 AM AEST
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that was really beautiful, tenderly written
pix xx |
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Re: Her
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:41:41 PM AEST
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Here's a powerful piece. Well written, good sir. A classic theme handled with skill.
Good dreaming to you. Sleep can be a good thing too, though.
Andrew |
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Re: Her
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by babygal on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:08:00 AM AEST
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| that's really sweet is she someone your dating or someone who you dated or just someone you want to date? |
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