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Careless Me
Contributed by
SimplyMe
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Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:39:58 AM in AEST
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It's only been a week since i first layed my eyes on you
Now i find myself caring far more than i was supposed to
It was only supposed to be flirting and teasing the usual stuff
But once i put my arms around you letting go was way too tough
We both know that neiter of us can handle this right now
When you said holding me just felt right all i could think was how?
I allowed myself to be so careless
And it all happened just from that first kiss
It's not love and it's most certainly not lust
But for some reason right now being with you is a must
I pace the floors when i'm all alone
And i bite my nails when i'm not talking with you on the phone
I sleep less than i usually do
And i sit up for hours just thinking about you
I'm drowning in a pool of confusion
Please wake me up and tell me it's just an illusion
If i'm correct nothing is usually as it seems
So that's it this is just one big confusing dream
It's obvious i'm not falling
And it's not your number i'm constantly calling
I'm wanting you so bad it's driving me insane
But i just can't allow myself it causes too much pain
It's mind over matter there is no such thing as love at first sight
Oh please dear god let me be right
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Re: Careless Me
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by mysonnet on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 04:43:10 AM AEST
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| great poem u've got (: keep them pouring in! |
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Re: Careless Me
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:40:21 AM AEST
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sounds like love to me , great deep poetry here
pix xx |
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Re: Careless Me
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:15:09 PM AEST
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| Wow! Very well expressed poem and the feelings are so tangable! I really like it great write! |
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Re: Careless Me
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:25:21 AM AEST
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i agree with Necromant
very well written and great topic
catz77 |
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Re: Careless Me
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:29:57 PM AEST
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A brilliant write. I hope it all works out just fine for you.
Love Angelxxxx |
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