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blue robin, why?
Contributed by
seanM
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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From out of no where a pretty face appears
and with a sigh i expect less than i should.
But with a smile she hands me a baby blue robins egg.
I should be so lucky to recieve somthing so precious.
But no matter how precious my robins egg could be
i somehow yet agian let it slip through my hands and
shatter with whats left of my dreams.
Copyright ©
seanM
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2005-02-22 23:36:17]
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Re: blue robin, why?
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:56:25 PM AEST
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Whoa, so short, but sad. Emotional.
**Britnee** |
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Re: blue robin, why?
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by cocoa_butter on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:50:56 AM AEST
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| I think its great that it so short, it almost seems to emphasis the point of the poem. A really beautiful poem. |
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