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Love is Not
Contributed by
hopefulheavyheart
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:25:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Love is Not
Love is not a person that controls,
So that I am lost.
Love is not a person who hurts,
Or takes advantage.
Love is not a person knowing better,
A father figure wanting more.
Love is not a person running away,
Deserting a love that’s torn.
Love is not sex,
Driven by alcohol.
Love is not forced,
By someone self absorbed.
Love is not giving in,
Cause I’m not worth something more.
Love is not contemplation,
Cause without it I am gone.
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2005-02-22 23:25:13]
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Re: Love is Not
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:32:52 PM AEST
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a masetpeice of widom.
huggs,
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Re: Love is Not
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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Great write, I agree completely and totally....
~ Marissa |
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Re: Love is Not
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by sojourner on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:03:40 AM AEST
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very good expression of what love is not.
Love is a feeling within your heart and mind that gives you a reason to go on,once touched by love, you'll never be the same
and as you grow older ,you will come to see there are many kinds of love.
sojourner,
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Re: Love is Not
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by LostInLife on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 01:01:49 AM AEST
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| This is really good. I relate to that and believe it. It reminds me of someone. |
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Re: Love is Not
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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| Amazing write. You're words were chosen so carefully and it really made this an incredible piece. I really like your style of writing. Keep it up! |
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