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Dancing under the rainbow
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:03:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'll love you today
I'll love you tomorrow
I'll share with you
Your laughter and sorrow
I'll be there for you
I'll always be
When your heart desires
Just think of me
I promised you my heart
I promised you my life
Just to take away
All of your heartache and strife
Reach out for me
Let me hold your hand
Sweet dreams will follow
You and I to our special land
There you can be happy
There you can be free
Dancing under the rainbow
Just you and me.......
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mina-1
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2005-02-22 23:03:46]
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Re: Dancing under the rainbow
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by mypetmeatball on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:05:43 PM AEST
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fit for a greeting card
which is great, if that's the style/level you were aiming for. |
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Re: Dancing under the rainbow
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:28:36 PM AEST
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| I like this alot....its really good. |
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Re: Dancing under the rainbow
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 05:04:28 AM AEST
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Wow now this is a heavenly masterpeice to all who read it.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dancing under the rainbow
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:48:17 AM AEST
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aww that was beautoful, really lovely, adorable to read
pix xx |
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Re: Dancing under the rainbow
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 03:48:02 PM AEST
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beautoful well done
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