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Where Is Love?
Contributed by
freckle
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:54:31 PM in AEST
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Where Is Love?
As I grow during my lifetime
I sit and think out loud
Where is my beautiful flowing love
that claims to be so proud
Where is the love I dreamed of
in childhood fairylands
Has it approached me, and unknowingly
I let it slip through my hands
I sit on my bed and cry in my pillow
till the light of dawn appears
Where is my love that I can't reach,
but which I feel is oh, so near
I search and search and wonder
for a love that is so true
And yet I've never stopped to think
that my love just might be you.
Carol
5/29/81 (who is really dating herself with this poem)
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freckle
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Re: Where Is Love?
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
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very nicely written Carol.
Our heart so much desires to find that love.
great piece of work. keep it up |
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Re: Where Is Love?
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by neveryours on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:26:28 PM AEST
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| I would be interested to know what you think of this poem, and how your perceptions of love have changed since (gasp) 1981? |
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Re: Where Is Love?
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:17:28 PM AEST
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You are not dating yourself dear ... you are simply illustrating that you have been writing beautiful words for some time. It is amazing how we fail at times to see what is right before our eyes. Fabulous Carol ... even now.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Where Is Love?
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:53:30 PM AEST
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Interesting. I tend to feel more and more that the love we dreamed of was just that...a dream.
What is real is the love we have for those around us. Sometimes it doesn't feel like love, but if we are dedicated to those people, that is what it surely is.
Stitch |
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