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Crash
Contributed by
mchristenson
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:22:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The regretful feeling she felt soon
as she watched him drift away beneath the white round moon.
The wisps of his presence fell through her hand
as easily as you could sift through the sand.
She said not goodbye, she hadn’t the chance
before she took part in this risky dance.
It happened so fast she could not tell
that it was his tiny yell.
It swept through the night and stabbed into the air
then died away, with no one to care.
She had tried to save him, with overbearing might,
but could not change the fate that was that night.
She was too late, as the deed was done,
She knew that death cheated no one.
The twisted steel remains of the cars lay mangled
And as she sat there a serene feeling spangled
She felt herself float slowly away
For she was not scared now, with him she would forever stay.
Copyright ©
mchristenson
... [
2005-02-22 19:22:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Crash
(User Rating: 1 ) by tawakwan on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:09:39 PM AEST (User
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Great amount of feeling. Really set a mood..Bravo.. |
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