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depressed
Contributed by
depressed_poet
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:22:55 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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do you remember last night?
when i yelled and cried?
when you sent me away,
for trying to commit suicide?
now im here,
in this horrible place,
i was better off dead,
yet this isnt the case,
you told me i needed help,
is that really what i need?
you know what i need..
is for me to bleed,
but your the adult,
you know whats best,
you say i need time to think,
i need time to rest,
so maybe your right,
im not saying that you are,
i guess a mental instatution,
isnt that far,
i guess i'll just stay,
chained to this bed,
oops the knife slipped,
sorry..im dead
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Re: depressed
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:28:40 PM AEST
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| I really wish I could say something that would make you feel better. You are a very talented writer. Keep your head. |
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Re: depressed
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by catz77 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:38:38 PM AEST
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i agree with sheri
you are talented and this is a sad but
good poem |
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Re: depressed
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by hopefulheavyheart on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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| It reminds me of me years ago. Maybe we can talk??? I wrote about my experience, but not so nicely or neatly. |
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Re: depressed
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by LadyWynter on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:02:30 PM AEST
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No matter how dark, how hopeless things seem, nothing is ever worth ending your life over. I've been there, I'm a cutter, and have suffered from really bad depression. But recently I learned that just when you least expect, something can change, and suddenly things aren't as dark as before. It's hard sometimes sweetie, but I promise things will turn around for you. You've got alot of talent, keep writing.If you ever want to talk, just shoot me a message.
*hugs*
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Re: depressed
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by DamentedSuicide on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:14:53 PM AEST
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| nice rite... but suicide isnt allways the answer |
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Re: depressed
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by Clocks on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:16:03 PM AEST
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Hey, I really like this poem .... It's exactly how it is...
I've been there too, and I'm still going through it... I'm not gonna try to stop you, or say it's not the answer... If you need to live, You'll have to accept it urself...
I agree that it's ussually not the right thing to do, but It can be very very hard....believe me I know...
If there's anything I can do... Just lemme know... |
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