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The Tide
Contributed by
gequetscht
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Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
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Do you feel the longing
Only the cold sea is so merciless
The tide is rising
And it is becoming night
So completely alone
You are drifting away
But where, tell me, do you wish to go
This cold sea is boundless
The tide washes upon still flesh
But who holds your hand
When it pulls you under
Here comes the tide
Over you
And you sink into the black water
And the moon rests
In its place among the dark heavens
Time stands still
And I am cold
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gequetscht
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2002-12-13 23:20:00]
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Re: The Tide
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by Icequeen on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 07:57:29 AM AEST
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| Interesting. Not quite sure what i feel about it :/ its good, thoughtful if ya get me :) |
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Re: The Tide
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 03:12:57 AM AEST
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I don't think it matters where I want to go
If I'm just going to end up drowning in the end...
Wondering if there's somewhere deeper that you're going with this. |
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