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Decaying soul
Contributed by
Vycky
on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You may call me a liar...It's understandable
You may call me an outcast...Could be true
You may call me a b***h...I can take that
But have you ever looked deeper than that?
Maybe I'm a lost soul that needs help...
You think I'm crazy...a no one...
It might be true...But have you ever took the time to look deeper?
And you wonder why...
Why I cut...why I want to die...
Why I cry over pain you don't see...
A nothing feels nothing, right?
Maybe to your point of view...
Well maybe you should change it before you hurt someone...
Like yourself.
Copyright ©
Vycky
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2002-12-13 23:00:00]
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Re: Decaying soul
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:49:46 PM AEST
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| This was so true,some dont seem to look deep enough to see the real you! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Decaying soul
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:39:26 AM AEST
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Wow, well first off I had to read a poem called Decaying Soul. I loved this poem it describes me a lot and how ppl misunderstand why ppl cut, burn, etc. My favourite line was "Why I cry over pain you don't see..." That line just stood out and grabbed me. AWESOME POEM. If u ever wanna talk feel free to e-mail me... fartingson@hotmail.com
-Bobo (Joel) |
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