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Please forgive me
Contributed by
Hihocherio
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:36:53 PM in AEST
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Every Night I pray,
Please Lord forgive me,
For these horrible things I've done,
I promise I'll never do it again,
Then when the weekend comes along,
and my friends start to pressure me,
I give in and commite a sin,
Then Sunday night comes along and I think of what I've done,
I ask forgiveness again,
and of course I'll never do it again,
It's been a month or so,
and I've gotten new friends,
changed my life around,
and no longer have to pray the horrible sinners prayer,
No matter how how much I lied,
or how much I sinned,
You were always there,
Never doughted me or gave up on me.
Copyright ©
Hihocherio
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2005-02-22 14:36:53]
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Re: Please forgive me
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by mypetmeatball on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:00:04 PM AEST
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Nice work, but the language needs to be spiced up a little bit. Tastes a little bland at times.
Also, I see blatant spelling errors, so try to clean that up. |
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Re: Please forgive me
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by dis1379 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:18:24 PM AEST
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| It was pretty good. I, too, saw some spelling errors. Other than that, not bad. |
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Re: Please forgive me
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:55:13 PM AEST
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Amen. Even in the most tempation, He alone forgives.
Peace
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Re: Please forgive me
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:39:03 AM AEST
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| I'm guessing your pretty young, maybe 13? Don't think that the things you and your friends are doing is something that is unforgiveable in gods eyes. You are young and trying things, I did, a lot of us did. You will grow up and mature and realize that it was just a phase, not a sin. It's ok, don't give yourself so much grief, you are not a horrible person. You can overcome things like drugs and alcohol (if that's the case), don't believe that you are horrible for it. Drugs and alcohol are bad yes and you should remove yourself from the situation, but everyone makes mistakes and god WILL forgive you. Good job with the writing and good luck! |
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