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Falling
Contributed by
Vycky
on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Trapped in a dark corner
Cowaring from a shadow
The shadow that haunts her everyday
"When will the touching stop?"
The shadow draws near
As she pushes herself into the wall
She is soon enveloped in the shadow
The darkness consumes her
The steel blade slides through her flesh
Her mind falls with each cut...
The memories consume her...
Of the malestive ***** that twisted her mind
That shadow...her father
The darkness her memories of her uncle
The girl...me Lost forever in her own thoughts
Copyright ©
Vycky
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2002-12-13 21:30:00]
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Re: Falling
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by Sonibe on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 09:54:42 PM AEST
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| That's sad....I want to cry, but I don't have that ability.... |
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Re: Falling
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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Very sad poem.... I hope things are ok with you now..
Jenni |
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Re: Falling
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 08:03:45 PM AEST
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| that was sad but it was good. Its really hard being a woman. |
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Re: Falling
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by Vycky on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 03:49:26 PM AEST
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| I've been trying to get more ideas for more poems...but nothings coming to mind. But thank you all for your great comments. They mean alot to me. Thank you again. |
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Re: Falling
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by Vycky on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 03:36:59 PM AEST
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| I would like to take the time to say to everyone who has commented on my poems....Thankx. They mean alot to me. It makes me feel better that there are people out like me....and who understand where I'm coming from. |
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