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When I Die
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:24:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When I die you would be
The last thing on my mind,
The greatest love
A man should ever find;
Through space and time
We would be together,
Never fading as a star
We'll shine forever and ever.
Copyright ©
Thivanka
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2005-02-22 10:24:37]
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Re: When I Die
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:00:58 PM AEST
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| This is a great write! |
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Re: When I Die
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by michelled43 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:13:54 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write...so much feeling in such a small poem.....awesome job ~chelle~ |
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Re: When I Die
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:15:24 PM AEST
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| aw, this is adorable! Nice write! |
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