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Shadows of the sun
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:27:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shaded complexion
Always on the cool of things
Hiding from the sun.
Copyright ©
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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2005-02-22 07:27:33]
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Re: Shadows of the sun
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:04:41 AM AEST
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Nice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Shadows of the sun
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by zaknafein8891 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:22:02 AM AEST
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| I can tell there is definately some meaning there but you didn't give me enough details to see it clearly. short poems are great as long as you give enough to properly convey the message or feeling. no offense though. |
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Re: Shadows of the sun
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by zaknafein8891 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:23:47 AM AEST
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| OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... its me again, I feel like an idiot now, I just realised its a Hiku. I really feel dumb. I did the last post. |
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